Republicans:OK, i know you guys are republicans so I'll try to keep this explanation as simple as possible. I'll also try to accommodate the fact that the only thing you really know is how to send troops into war whenever you possibly can. The big black thing is called a Bull. This animal is the male version of a cow (big animal that has black and white spots also the animal you get milk from.) The bull has huge horns on the top of it's head that can stab threw through you if you get in the way. The person in the colorful outfit is a "Bull Fighter." he makes the bull charge at him and then he quickly moves out of the way. In this picture the bull somehow dug his head into the dirt and catapulted his back legs into the air.
Musicians:
To all of the musicians out there this picture will be obvious. As the music plays loudly to the crowd the bull fighter/composer is dancing around the bull with the long sharp horns and keeping the beat for the orchestra. As the nimble composer leads the beautiful music he gracefully steps out of the way. The bull is not so graceful and his horns get stuck into the flat ground and his fight fly up as he gets major air. After that he lands flat on his back. His F.A.C.E. gets all full of dirt. This upsets the bull and makes him want to attack more. Although this bull is in good shape, he still doesn't need any rests.
3 comments:
Those poor Republicans... I bet you're a Democrat.
Anyway, I thought both descriptions were very well done.
Though brutal, the first description is my favorite of the two. I like how you assumed they were stupid and needed everything spoon-fed to them before they could understand it.
"...also the animal you get milk from." = Best line
Musicians would definitely appreciate all of the little references to music you slipped into the description (F.A.C.E. being the most obvious). And because there are those of us who didn't notice anything on the first read through, thank you for the italics.
Errors I noticed:
1. "Description" is spelled wrong in the title, whoops.
2. "can stab threw through you"
I bet you can spot the problem there..
3. "a 'Bull Fighter.' he"
... and that one...
4. "top of it's head"
NO '
hahahha hilarious im not going to be one who critques spelling cause if i did id be a huge hipocrit... see my point. although the first one is terribly offensive and provakative i loved it. even though i am very much at a disagreement with your typical distrot left wing views. it flowed well even though it deviated from the picture totally with the war comment also funny. and i wouldnt expect you to know because your a narrow minded democrat but us shoot em up republicans will probably tell you that milk does not infact come from bulls... im sure thats not what you meant but thats what it came across as.
the musican one is genuins... i had to read it twice to get how you cleverly added the musical words. i see how hard you tried to fit thoes words in but as you did you took away from some of the flow. which is fine aslong as you realize it and im sure you did... very nice work i enjoyed it a lot... and you should read mine i wrote for republicans
I loved the beginning of the first description, however I felt that it ended without any type of conclusion. I know it's not a story, but it could've used just a final sentence. There were a couple small errors that I'm sure you could fix easily with a simple proofread. The musician description took me a while to understand. I was just looking at the words and italics and wondered why they were written that way. Then I realized the point of it all and I love how you tied the ideas together.
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